On Writing Slim, A Technique for Productive Writing

All credit to author Colleen Behnke for the term “writing slim.” She mentioned it to me as we discussed working together to publish her middle grade novel Marshmallow. I had asked her about her approach to writing, and she said she tends to “write slim.” I immediately connected to the term. It reminded me of…

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Stumbling Over Pebbles—The Little Things in Stories

I’m going to write a little scene here, and I want you to tell me what you think about it. I stopped over to visit Jenny at her home a mile outside of downtown Milwaukee. She and her husband had bought the ten acres of land about four years ago and had built an intimidating…

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Trying Out “AI Proofreading” in Our Editing Process

I’ve yet to see any “intelligence” in so-called artificial intelligence (AI) tools, but I’ve tried out as many as I can to see if they can be useful in proofreading. For the most part, the tools do poorly. The problem is that they are focused on rewriting (or even writing from scratch) based on tone…

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Summary, Exposition, and Narrative

Facts and information! All books need them in order for the reader to understand the story. But deciding how to deliver them is often the difference between a book that’s a slog and a book where the pages turn themselves. Whether fiction or non-fiction, and with works for any age of reader, the writer’s ability…

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Details, Juggling, and Chekhov’s Gun

Imagine you’re reading a story and learn in the first chapter that the protagonist does not speak. Maybe he can speak but chooses not to. Maybe he is unable to speak. No matter the reason, the fact remains.  As we readers assess this story, we are immediately intrigued! How did the protagonist get this way?…

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Whoa Writing: Crafting Four-Dimensional Characters

Writing advice often stresses the importance of writing three-dimensional characters. These characters are “fully fleshed out,” which is a really creepy metaphor if you think about it for too long! They feel like “real people” because they have flaws and biases and personalities and backstories and all the other things that we know about real…

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